Japan's Comments on PDTR 9573-9

Japan's Comments on PDTR 9573-9(ISO/IEC JTC1 N5138)

Title:	Using SGML Public Identifiers for Specifying Data Notations
Source:	The National Body of Japan
Date:	March 19, 1998
Status:	Comments appended to the Approval Vote for ISO/IEC JTC1 N5138
	The National Body of Japan approves the PDTR 9573-9, Using SGML Public Identifiers for Specifying Data Notations (ISO/IEC JTC1 N5138, JTC1/WG4 N1958) with the following comments.

Editorial Comments

(1) Subclauses

All the subclause should be assigned with their subclause numbers.

(2) "Document interchange standards" in "ISO 9070 public text object identifiers for standardized data notations"

Hytime: ISO/IEC 10744:1992 should be ISO/IEC 10744:1997.
ISO maths: ISO/IEC TR9593 should be ISO/IEC TR9573-13.

(3) ISO/IEC 9070

Last para of "Foreword": "ISO 9070" should be "ISO/IEC 9070".
2nd line of "References": "ISO 9070:1991" should be "ISO/IEC 9070:1991".
"Miscellaneous standards" in "ISO 9070 public text object identifiers for standardized data notations": Public identifiers: "ISO/IEC 9070:1987" should be "ISO/IEC 9070:1991".

(4) ISO 9070 public identifier

Last line of "ISO/IEC 9070 names": "ISO/IEC 9070" public identifiers should be "ISO 9070" public identifiers.