Vote on Committee Draft 10179:1996/FPDAM2

Date of circulation:
2004-04-19

Closing date:
2004-07-26

Reference number ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34 0510

ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34 Information Technology -- Document Description and Processing Languages

Secretariat: Canada (SCC)

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Please return all votes and comments in electronic form directly to the SC Secretariat by the due date indicated.

10179:1996/FPDAM2

Title: Information technology -- Processing languages -- Document Style Semantics and Specification Language (DSSSL) -- Amendment 2: Extensions to DSSSLmultilingual and complicated document styles

Vote:

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APPROVAL OF THE DRAFT AS PRESENTED

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APPROVAL OF THE DRAFT WITH COMMENTS AS GIVEN ON THE ATTACHED

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general:

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technical:

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editorial:

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DISAPPROVAL OF THE DRAFT FOR REASONS ON THE ATTACHED

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Acceptance of these reasons and appropriate changes in the text will change our vote to approval

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ABSTENTION (FOR REASONS BELOW):

P-member voting: Japan

Date: 2004-06-30

Submitted by: Yushi KOMACHI


Attachment:
Japan's Comments on ISO/IEC 10179/FPDAM2 (SC34 N510): Extensions to multilingual and comlicated document styles

(1) Introduction

The wording "... comlicated document styles which have been required by ..."
should be replaced with "... complicated document styles required by ...".

(2) ext-line-number

"s style" should be "a style".

(3) open-paren-space-length

"length between ..." should be "distance between ...".

(4) first-line-open-paren-space-length

"length between ..." should be "distance between ...".


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