Vote on Proposed Draft Amendment SC 34 N 216

Date of circulation:
2001-06-20

Closing date:
2001-09-20

Reference number ISO/JTC 1/SC 34 N 216

 

ISO/JTC 1/SC 34 Committee Title

Document Description and Processing Languages

Secretariat: National Body : USA

Circulated to P-members of the committee for voting

Please return all votes and comments in electronic form directly to the SC 34 Secretariat by the due date indicated.

 

ISO/IEC

Title:  PDAM1 to ISO/IEC 10179: Extensions to DSSSL

 

Vote:

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APPROVAL OF THE DRAFT AS PRESENTED

_X__

APPROVAL OF THE DRAFT WITH COMMENTS AS GIVEN ON THE ATTACHED

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general:

_X_

technical:

_X_

editorial:

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DISAPPROVAL OF THE DRAFT FOR REASONS ON THE ATTACHED

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Acceptance of these reasons and appropriate changes in the text will change our vote to approval

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ABSTENTION (FOR REASONS BELOW):

P-member voting:

National Body (Acronym): JPN

Date:

2001-09-09

Submitted by:

Yushi KOMACHI

Reply to: Sara Hafele, Secretariat, ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 34, ANSI, 25 West 43rd St , New York, NY 10036
Telephone: 212-642-4937; Facsimile: 212-840-2298; E-Mail: shafele@ansi.org

Comments

1. In the headings of Annex B, C, D, E and F, there should be the indication of "Informative".

2. In 12.6.28.5, 12.6.28.6, 12.6.28.7, "disply" should be replaced with "display".

3. In Annex C, just before example, the incorrect tagging <P< P> should be replaced with <P>.

4. In clause 3. and 4. of Annex B, each unordered list item should be added with some explanations.

5. In Annex D, the Grove Plan and SGML Property Set should be added with some explanations.

6. In Annex E, the large table should be split into several parts for rendering on pages of ISO documents.

7. In Annex F, types and relational characteristics should be clarified in the table. The descriptions "<unknown>" should be "unknown".